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24) cielblue 

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2011-4-2 16:22 Reply to

This is beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing.
23) Duyen 

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2011-3-6 17:10 Reply to

embarrassment Your fic is amazing! I swear it sooo good and I don't know what some readers are unsatisfied...but I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Your a very good writer!
22) Jenny  Female

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2011-1-19 14:04 Reply to

I read this way back in June of 2010 and I've got to say, this was the first YunJae story I've read yet it still remains as my favourite. The livid descriptions and colourful language allows me to feel the scenes. I love it~

Btw way, for some strange reason, whenever I search up body parts of DBSK I find this site xD The first time was with Yunho's moobs and the 2nd time was with Jaejoong's waist lol.

Jacqui 2011-1-30 03:30
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Thank you. :) I appreciate that.

...This site comes up when you look for Dong Bang body parts? XD That's hilarious~ I don't understand why, but that's funny.
21) Pia  Female

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2010-12-12 13:57 Reply to

I really liked this fic but it feels like its been done before? I mean, losing your memory and falling for someone else is so unoriginal. I could already predict most of the story when I read the first few chapters. You're a good writer but try something more unique and different! <3

Jacqui 2011-1-30 03:25
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This story was written over five years ago. LoL It isn't recent by any means and honestly...any idea that can be used is unoriginal--it's *all* been done before. I've written quite a lot more since this fic, though. This isn't my only piece of writing. ;D

Unoriginal doesn't automatically mean "bad." But glad you liked it. ^^
20) XyZ 

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2010-12-4 08:13 Reply to

Im angry at you at chap 18 .... GRRRR! #@*%!

I really cant imagine anyone giving up there love because they pity someone.. especially if that someone is your mutual enemy.

That plot twist was quite unrealistic. You can just use blackmail or possibly something more cliche, but at least it's somewhat realistic.

Jacqui 2011-1-30 03:29
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Everyone is entitled to their opinion. ^^ But I'm quite curious as to why you read all the way to chapter 18 when you clearly didn't like the story? o_O

Also, this fic was written over five years ago and it was my first lengthy fic. Not everyone makes a masterpiece their first time around. ;D
19) crabby_89  Female

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2010-11-20 22:54 Reply to

i love this ff..=))
but sometimes, i couldn't understand what were they saying since they said in korean..LOLL
18) dan112  Female

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2010-10-27 09:09 Reply to

WOW ..AMAZING fic from AMAZING AUTHER big grin
ur fic is my fav untill now & that's 4 sure bb .XD wink

keep up the good work *thumbs up*

p.s/ if u have LJ can u give me the link really i want to keep up with ur fics smile

Jacqui 2010-11-17 22:23
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My writing LJ is here:

[literary]

:)
17) mixlovetoho  Female

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2010-5-27 19:48 Reply to

i love yunjae so much
16) jae4now 

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2010-4-3 21:52 Reply to

this story is so good. very very well written. i hope who ever wrote this will write some more..
15) Niji 

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2010-3-17 11:39 Reply to

thank you~
i plan to post it on my LJ: [niji182.livejournal.com]
i'll credit it properly of course~
thank you again <33

Jacqui 2010-3-23 04:47
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No problem, hon. Don't work too hard translating it. ^^;
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